The present

W.A.L.T: Write a narrative.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.

In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present. I hope you enjoy my story.

The Present

The present

One sunny day I was playing on my PS 4 was playing my Favorite game I had lots of fun ,Then my mum came in from going somewhere. She open the blinds I said AAA then, she gave me a box and said it was a present for me, it was weird because she never gives me a present often, so I was surprised so I opened it and it was a dog. The boy loved it but then I saw that it had a missing leg ,it was gross so I kicked it away and the boy kicked the box away then the dog came back, so I kicked it again. it see's the red ball under the carbide it ran to it, and hit it’s head on it I left then it looked at me so I looked at my game.It came to me and gave me the ball I kicked it then, it ran to it and it ran in the box and got stuck it bent its head on the table then it got out and got the ball and ran back so I ,started to like it it was cool,silly,and it has something  like me so I got, my crochet and got the ball and went outside, and got the ball out of my pocket and I fro it the dog ran to get it.    At the start I fort it was gross and way wood my mum, give me a dog with three legs but, then I know it was because it was, like me and that it feels like me and I, feel it to me having something like ,me was way my mum got it ,and it was that I have a missing ,leg and that the dog has a missing leg too.