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Friday, 22 September 2017

Partly Cloudy

It was another normal sunny evening in the city of Los Angeles. The city was packed with cars, trucks and pets. The sun was glazing as it was going down and I was starting to fall asleep.

 There were big fluffy clouds. Not normal clouds they were clouds with powers that made dogs, cats and mini toys. They would also rap the toys up.

 My job was to give the toys to people. I get to go all around the world and meet amazing people. One time I had to give a package to Richie macaw he had a Mancini.

 I got to deliver cool stuff to people like dogs, cats, balls and mini cars. My job was all I could ask for. Everybody was happy and joyful. Sometimes we got gift as well and we got to chose.It was so great to meet new people, pets, daredevils and wrestlers.

 But the cool thing was I got to work with my family. my dad, mom 34 brother's and 31 sisters. They all looked like me and worked like. 

My job was like the best job in the world. My partner was corbyn he was a cloud. he was one, of the clouds who made the toy who made the pets. 

and rapt the stuff if It wasn't for him I would be making people happy. Corbyn was light pink with spots of white. He felt like cotton balls that you would liked to eat. He smelled heavenly. When I fell down I would always give him a cdole. 

 But not all the could were cool and nice. There was always one that stood out. His name was snap. He wasn't the best at making toys but there were some people who liked what he makes.

 I was the only one to volunteer to help him. I always felt sad for him. Every time he makes a mistake the more people hate him. Oh no what's he going to make now. 

A porcupine you gotta be kidding me. PINCH PINCH OCH BANG as the spikes was digging in my skin. I'm back what do have now puff it was a shape of a shark.

 I have an idear I said in my head. I need some stuff. Corbyn I fly away to find corbyn. There you are can I have a helmet and some strong . I’m back now I gotta package to deliver. Let’s do this.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sage I like your story about partly cloudy but you said cdole im quite confused other then that its awesome.

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